The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

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information about the exports from

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and

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to New

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from 1994 to 2004.

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, what stands out from the graph is that New

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imports more from

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than

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. In

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of the

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number from

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, it started at about 4

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in 1994,

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it increased sharply to just over 6

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in 1996. After

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it went down to around 3

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in 1999, which is lower than the

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figure from

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by 1

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. The number of

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to New

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rose dramatically to above 7

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in 2000, after which point there was a decline to almost 5

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in 2002.

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growth until it

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8

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in 2004. With regard to the number of

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by New

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from

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began at 3

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in 1994, which is considered less than

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.

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it rose slightly to over 6

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in 1996. After

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it has dropped to 2

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at the end

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of the period.