Your company has recently introduced a new uniform for the staff. But you have learned that the staff members are not happy about it. Write a letter to your manager about it. In your letter, explain why you think the staffs are not happy with the new uniform what you want the new uniform to be like and give some suggestions to handle the situation Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I trust you are doing well. The purpose of
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letter is to express dissatisfaction with the new
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for the staff. First and foremost, the pink colour of the
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is not suitable for most of the employees.
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that, the full-sleeve t-shirts are not practical to work
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to health and safety reasons on the production floor.
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, the
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should be revised and should be in either Blue or Black colour.
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, the polo t-shirt without pockets is preferable
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anything else for everyone as it will allow employees to work without any restrictions to work quickly. From my perspective, the interim solution until all employees receive their newly proposed uniforms should be to allow us to wear casual clothes.
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but not least, workers should not be responsible for paying for
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new
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. I hope that you will take all necessary steps to resolve issues with the new
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design. Thank you for your support. Sincerely, Ruchin Patel

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Consider elaborating more on why the pink color is unsuitable.
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Be more specific about health and safety issues related to full-sleeve t-shirts.
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Use transitions between paragraphs for smoother flow.
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Clear and polite tone throughout the letter.
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Each paragraph addresses a single idea clearly.
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Uses a suitable formal greeting and closing.
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