The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

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Belgium

in the years 1970 and 2000 in a percentage way. The level of

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in

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experienced a decline from 74 to 47

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for

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and 43 to 40 for

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States of America surprisingly showed a significant increase from 36 to 38

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was happen

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from 79 to 19

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almost the same. In

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more stability in the

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. There is no denying the fact that exploring other planets by governments is helpful

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why they do not fix the

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problems first.

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essay will analyse both points of view and express my opinion. On one hand, spending money by

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to look for

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on some other plants would be a great thing regardless of how hard it could be. In

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idea may lead other

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sectors to borrow

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project, and making some

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, it would be costly to live on.

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problems would be more

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possible to say that, spending the government resources on fixing the issue that happened on the

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could be way better.

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, the more they spend on the

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the more they get comfort in the future.

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, the gas

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emission

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by burning the

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fule. In conclusion, there no

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true answer to

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question but I believe that the government should spend most of their money on fixing the problem that make it not good for

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other planets.