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Writing Samples
Band 6

You are soon going to spend three months doing work experience in an organisation. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you are going to do work experience. In your letter, thank the manager for the opportunity to work experience explain what you hope to learn from the work experience ask some questions about the work experience you are going to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear
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 or Madam, I trust you are doing well. The purpose of writing
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 letter
to
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 inquire about some information related to my three
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 experience, which I am going to do at your well-known organization. First and foremost, I am very thankful to you for
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 great opportunity, which you provided to me.
Besides
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,
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 work placement will help me a lot to enhance my professional skills and gain more experience.
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, I am very excited to learn
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 whole recruitment cycle from talented HR professionals at your company.
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, I will
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 get essential information about the CHRP designation
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 working as a recruiter. At the very least, I would be grateful if you could provide me
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 orientation details of
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 work experience.
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, a chart flow is needed to get a better understanding
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 position. I look forward to your prompt reply. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Dhruvi Patel

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task achievement
Consider providing a more detailed question about the orientation or the tasks you may perform, as this can enhance clarity.
coherence and cohesion
Try to ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve clarity and coherence.
task achievement
The letter has a polite and professional tone, which is appropriate for the context.
coherence and cohesion
The overall structure of the letter is clear, with a good introduction, body, and conclusion.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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