The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate information about students who were able to communicate in different
languages
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with English at one British university in England in 2000
as well as
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2010.
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,it's clear that in 2000, Another Language
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dominant, but Two other
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and German only are the lowest. 2010 compared to 2000 has some changes
such
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as Another language getting a little bit higher including it's still the highest. Spanish only and French only get reduced to Germany only level. Looking at the data in more detail, we can notice that in 2000 and 2010, Other
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were superior at 30% and 35%.
However
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,Germany only, which is inferior
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does not change between 2000
in addition
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to 2010 at 10%.
Furthermore
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, in 2000 and 2010, Spanish and Germany only decreased by 20%
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also
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and also
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15% to 10% making them the lowest. No other
languages
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and two other
languages
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get an increase at 15% with10% to 20% and 15%

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words languages with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • multilingualism
  • globalisation
  • immigration
  • education policy
  • career prospects
  • cultural understanding
  • distribution
  • percentage
  • increased/decreased
  • significant
  • trends
  • shifts
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