The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

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The supplied line graph demonstrates Australian
exports
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in percentages between 1990 and 2012. Australia
exports
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to 4 countries, which are Japan, the US, China and
India
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.
It is clear that
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exports
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to China rapidly increased, meanwhile,
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to other countries were steadily declining. Even though
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's imports from Australia saw little rise, they became the least exported
at the end
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of the period. In 1990, the market to China was under 5 percent, but it slowly started to grow and in 2000 it rocked up to 30 percent, which is nearly 6 times more than at the beginning.
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transport to Japan was at the top among these countries at the start lower than 30 per cent, it fell down to 20 and till' 2012 it was smoothly dropping. The
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to the US and
India
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fluctuated. The first one dipped and moved downward until 2010 and slightly increased becoming third in
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group with around 8 per cent.
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India
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,
it
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dramatically rising,
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, it could not pass by
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to the US with little above 5 per cent.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Percentage
  • Exports
  • Trend analysis
  • Upward/downward trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Comparison
  • Peak performance
  • Decline
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Inferred
  • Global events
  • Economic context
  • Reflect
  • Influence
  • Patterns
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