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The diagram below shows the various stages required to produce coffee products from coffee beans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the various stages required to produce coffee products from coffee beans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The diagram defines the various stages required to produce
coffee
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products
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 from
coffee
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beans
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.
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,
this
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 process consists of 8 steps to produce
coffee
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products
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. It starts with harvesting
coffee
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beans
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 and ends with purchasing
coffee
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products
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. The process begins with harvesting
coffee
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beans
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 from plants.
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 is carried out only once per year. Once harvested, they are sent for processing. The next stage involves drying the seeds in the sun for 24 to 72 hours, after which the
beans
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 are sent for hulling. Here, the outer skin is separated from the
beans
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. In step 5, the
coffee
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beans
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 are roasted for 10 to 20 minutes. Once the
coffee
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beans
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 are roasted, they are packed in paper or plastic bags. These are
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 delivered to different eateries where they are bought by consumers as ready
products
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. These may be in the form of packaged
coffee
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 or ready-to-drink
coffee
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such
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 as hot or cold
coffee
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, products, beans with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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