The line graph shows the birth rate, population growth rate and death rate from 1940 until 2020 in Scotland. The three different variables are measured in percentages

The line graph shows the birth rate, population growth rate and death rate from 1940 until 2020 in Scotland. The three different variables are measured in percentages
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The line graph depicts information on birth, population growth and death in Scotland over a period of 80 years from 1940. All three percentages are seen falling over the years.
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, The birth and death rate has majorly fallen over the given time span.
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, population growth
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experienced a fall in the graph, a significant rise can
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be seen, unlike the other rate.
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, the population growth is seen starting at slightly less than 1% in 1940, reaches its peak in a decade and thereby, beginning the have a considerable dip in the figure reaching 0 in the early 2000. Looking at the birth rate, is seen having a significant decrease in the numbers reaching almost 0.5% by the end of the period. The graph had a very minor climb in the first and third decades.
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a similar pattern is seen in the death rates, the fall is on the whole very gradual compared to others. There was a sharp decrease till the late 1950s and had a level off till 1980. The later part of the period had very minor fluctuations in the percentage

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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