You recently notice a local restaurant offering a part time job Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter •Explain that you would like to apply for this job •Give some details of relevant experience that you have •specify the date and time that would suit for you You should You don’t write any address

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you that I read about your job offer in the newspaper. I am excited to work with you in your restaurant as a

part timer

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. Now I am

studing

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studying

in college and I want to support myself financially. I have

experienced

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which is perfect for

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job. My study is

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related to 'Hotel Management'.

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, I have

a good information

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about customer service.

Beside

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apply

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this

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, I worked in the 'Super Taste' restaurant for one year which is very popular in my city.

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, my communication and computer skills are perfect. Do you kindly give me a chance to show my potential? I am available from 25th March 2025. I can work after 5 PM on

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apply

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weekdays and

full-time

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am full-time

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available on weekends. Hoping for

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response from your side. Yours Faithfully, Jessica

hk3519552Mon Mar 17 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Consider adding a brief introduction to the main points of your letter to enhance overall clarity.

task achievement

Try to specify what you mean by 'perfect for this job' with a specific skill or ability that enhances your application.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to proofread for spelling errors, such as 'studing' which should be 'studying'.

task achievement

You clearly express your interest in the position and relate your education to the job.

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You provide specific availability for work, which is helpful for the manager.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

145 words

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