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The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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 line
graph
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illutrates
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illustrates
 about the
oil
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 extraction and usage in
china
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China
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 from 1982 to 2006. On the right side of
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the graph
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graph
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graph,
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 we can see numbers which
shows
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show
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 us
about
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apply
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the
production
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 of
oil
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barreis
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barrels
 per day. Under the
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graph
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graph,
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 there are years mentioned and in the
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graph
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graph,
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 two
liines
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lines
 of red and orange colour are drawn which
tells
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tell
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 the
production
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 and consumption of
oil
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resectively
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respectively
.
To begin
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, we can see the lines are at
equal
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an equal
the equal
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 point in the year 1965 but in 1975 we can visualize that the
production
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 of
oil
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 is more than its consumption. Afterwards, the
production
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 remains stable
of
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at
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 three
barreis
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barrels
barriers
 per day till 1995 but after
that
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that,
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 a minor increase
occur
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occurs
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 in
the
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apply
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production
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.
On the other hand
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, the usage of
oil
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 remains steady till 1985 and after
that
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that,
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 a
gradually
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gradual
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 increase occur of almost 6.5
barreis
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barrels
barriers
 per day till 2010

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, oil, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • oil production
  • oil consumption
  • gradual increase
  • surpass
  • overtake
  • reliance on imports
  • disparity
  • steady rise
  • growing gap
  • significant
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