The line graph below shows the percentage of people in Africa, subscribing to move by and fixed line phones from 1994 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph below shows the percentage of people in Africa, subscribing to move by and fixed line phones from 1994 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the proportion of Africans who

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mobile and

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phones between 1994

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2004.

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, we can see that both

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systems were used but the mobile changed enormously.

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just a slight change of 3.1 till 2004.

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subscribing

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to mobile were

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0.06 almost near to zero in 1994 but we can

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see a slight growth in it till 1999. Onwards, we can visualize a gradual growth in it The consumption of mobile in 2004 was 8.8.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

116 words

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