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Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: •explain what you are currently doing •describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview and give me the accurate score .

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Dear Sir/Mam, I am
witing
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writing
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this
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 letter to apply for a
vacany
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vacancy
 in your restaurant 'Indian Food'. I came to know about it from one of my friends
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is
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has been
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 working in your restaurant
over
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for
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last
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the last
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 2 years. I have recently completed my education in Culinary Management course. Nowadays, I am doing
part-time
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a part-time
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 job as a cleaner in a warehouse. So
i
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I
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 Am looking for a full-time job. As I have two years experience as a cook and a
brilient
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brilliant
 cook certificate that
i
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 gained from my past experience. I am not only able to learn things quickly but
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 able to work under pressure. I am willing to attend an interview seven days
in
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apply
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a week from 9
A.M
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A.M.
 to 5 P.M. It is
humble
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 request to give me feedback on my skills. I am looking forward
for
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 your positive consideration.
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Yours
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Your
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Yours
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 faithfully, Rupinder Kaur.

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Task Achievement
Clarify your current situation more precisely; for example, specify if you are seeking full-time employment, enhancing your suitability for the role.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure your spelling is accurate (e.g., 'writing' instead of 'witing', 'vacancy' instead of 'vacany'). Small errors can distract from the overall message.
Coherence and Cohesion
Organize your ideas clearly in distinct paragraphs: one for your current situation, one for your suitability, and one for availability.
Task Achievement
Your letter has a friendly and polite tone, which is excellent for a job application.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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