The pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts compare the changes in spending

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between

beetwen

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between

years in the UK school

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, the most

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noticeable

notable

noticable

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noticeable change

changem

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change

changes

furniture

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in furniture

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and equipment

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teachers

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teachers'

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salary

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salaries

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had

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did

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not

get

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huge changes. Resources e.g books rose up in the centre and

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slightly

got down

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hand

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other items as insurance

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changing a little bit. In 1981, the biggest share of the budget (40%) went to teachers’ salaries.

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rose to 50% in 1991 before decreasing slightly to 45% in 2001. Other workers’ salaries followed a downward trend, starting at 28%,

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dropping to 22% and 15% in the following years. Furniture and equipment saw significant changes, beginning at 15% in 1981, dropping to just 5% in 1991, and

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sharply increasing to 23% by 2001. Resources peaked in 1991 at 20%, after being 15% in 1981 and falling to 9% in 2001. Insurance, the smallest category in 1981 (2%), increased gradually to reach 8% by 2001. In summary, the most consistent expense was teachers’ salaries,

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other categories experienced noticeable shifts over the years.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

179 words

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The pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people think that the best way to become successful in life is to get a university education, whereas others say this is no longer true. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people?