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Band 5.5

The given charts present information on the distribution of oil resources across different regions of the world and the proportion of oil consumption in those regions.

The given charts present information on the distribution of oil resources across different regions of the world and the proportion of oil consumption in those regions.
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The pie
chart
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illustrate
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illustrates
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 data
of
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on
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devided
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divided
 oil
resource
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resources
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to
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into
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 7 countries and their
consuming
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consumption
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. Starting in the Middle East with 803.6
BBL
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 which
is almost be
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is almost
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 half of the
remaning
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remaining
 6
contries
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countries
, And Europe is
the
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at the
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 lewest of the
chart
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by
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with
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 12.28
BBL
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, After
Middle
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the Middle
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 East we have Central & South America
by
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 328.26
BBL
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shows
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showing
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 20% from the
chart
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. North
america
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America
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 reach
to
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apply
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13% with 219.79
BBL
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 more than Africa by 5%
while
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 Africa
8
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was 8
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%. In the
end
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end,
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 we can see Asia % Oceania have had 3% of the
chart
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 by 46
BBL
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 and Eurasia come over 7% by 118.9%.
Overall
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Middle
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the Middle
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 East has the largest portion of the
chart
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while
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 Europe has the smallest.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, bbl with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 5 times.
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