The bar chart shows a comparison of the daily routines of school pupils between three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows a comparison of the daily routines of school pupils between three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart shows a comparison of the daily routines of school pupils between three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph compares the lifestyle of students
of
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from
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three different
countries
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United
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the United
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States
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,
Australia
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, and
Canada
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. Especially, the chart gives us the number of
hours
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during which the students sleep, study, or relax.
Overall
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, the
hours
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of sleeping in the three
countries
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are similar,
while
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the
hours
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of studying and relaxing change among the
countries
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. In the United
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States
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States,
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the
hours
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are equally distributed over the day, with 8.5
hours
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of sleeping, 8
hours
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of studying and 7.5
hours
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of relaxing. Generally, the
hours
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of
sleeping
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sleep
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are
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similarly
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in
Australia
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, amounting to 7
hours
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, and
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Canada
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in Canada
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, equal to 8
hours
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.
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the
hours
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of studying are practically the same in
United
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the United
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States
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– 8
hours
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– and
Canada
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– 8.5
hours
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– in
Australia
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this
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figure is extremely high,
peaked
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to
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at
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13
hours
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. Another interesting proportion is about relaxing. In the United
States
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and
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Canada
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Canada,
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students spend the same amount of time relaxing, equal to 7.5
hours
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. In
Australia
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,
instead
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,
this
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percentage is just 4
hours
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, almost
an
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apply
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half of the other
countries
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, states, australia, canada, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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