The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Thailand who visited four different places in Bangkok. Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Thailand who visited four different places in Bangkok. Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Thailand who visited four different places in Bangkok. Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
tourists
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to Thailand visited four different places in
Bangkok
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. The percentage of the
number
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of
tourists
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in each place changes every year. Regarding
Bangkok
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Zoo, the
number
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of
tourists
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has decreased significantly from 50% in 2015 to 10% in 2017. The
number
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remained steady around 20-30% in the 2 years between. The
number
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of visitors to the Sea World has dropped sharply from 70% in 2015 to 20% in 2017. There was
similar
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a similar
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situatuion
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situation
as
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at
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the
Bangkok
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Zoo as the
number
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of visitors
were
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was
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steady in 2015 and 2016. Concerning Wax Museum,
tourists
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number
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has
rose
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risen
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steadily from 45% in 2014 to 80% in 2016.
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, it declined a little bit to 70% in 2017. The
number
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of visitors to
China Town
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Chinatown
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has surged significantly from 20% in 2014 to 100% in 2016. Yet, it dropped sharply to 10% in 2017. In general, the
number
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of
tourists
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in
Bangkok
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has decreased a lot from 2014 to 2017 as the graph shows that the percentages has dropped significantly.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, bangkok, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • tourists
  • attraction
  • trend
  • significant
  • decline
  • peak
  • cultural significance
  • popularity
  • preferences
  • comparison
  • evaluate
  • data
  • analyze
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