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The line graph below shows the production of different types of fuel in the UK from 1981 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the production of different types of fuel in the UK from 1981 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows information about the main types of
fuel
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 used in the UK between 1981 and 2000. It compares how the production of each
fuel
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 changed over time.
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, the most obvious trend is that petroleum increased steadily during the period,
while
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 coal dropped sharply.
At
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In
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 the beginning, most
fuel
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 types had moderate figures, but petroleum was an exception. It was the
highest produced
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fuel
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 throughout the period, rising to about 140 million tonnes by 2000. Before
this
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 growth, there was a small drop in 1991, but it quickly recovered and continued to rise. Meanwhile, the difference between coal and natural gas became larger over time. Natural gas went up after a
short fall
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shortfall
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 at the start, and it remained stable at around 80 million tonnes towards the end.
On the other hand
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, coal kept falling and dropped to under 40 million tonnes by 2000.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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