The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The line chart provides data about the proportion of Australian exports to four nations between 1990 and 2012. In general, Australia exported more products to China, having the highest rate

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years. Looking into the details, China's imports accounted for 2% and India showed a proportion of 1% in 1990.

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, the former had a rapid surge showing a peak of 30% in 2012 outracing the other countries.

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, the latter experienced a

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increase accounting

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the end of the time. At the

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importations were the highest rate among the nations

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china's

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proportions were the lowest.

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. The United States's percentages experienced

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throughout

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, ending 2012 with a rate of 7,5% of importations.