The graph shows the comparison of job’s rates in the UK's three sectors of economy from 2000 to 2010.

The graph shows the comparison of

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rates in the UK's three sectors of

economy

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the economy

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from 2000 to 2010.

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, what can be seen from the graph is there was a significant decline in the private

sector

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from the beginning to the end of the period. In the early decade, the public

sector

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remained the same before fluctuating and went up gradually. Another interesting point is that despite having a fluctuation, self-employment has risen considerably. Talking about the details, the private

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started at the highest rates, with close to reaching 50% and decreased significantly to reach the bottom

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the end of the period having only 20%.

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on the other hand

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, started with a stable rate for three consecutive years, with about 40% and fluctuated before reaching the peak, at just above 50%. Almost similar to the public

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, self-employment

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experienced a fluctuation during the period, it started from about 20% and rose considerably reaching just under 30% in 2010.

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The graph shows the comparison of job’s rates in the UK's three sectors of economy from 2000 to 2010.

You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Apologize for your absence and explain the reasoning. Explain why you had to be at the other event. Explain what you will do to catch up.

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