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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of experts in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of experts in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the value of a country's exports in five different product categories—petroleum
products
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, engineered goods, gems and jewellery, agricultural
products
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, and textiles—in the years 2015 and 2016. Units are measured in
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billion
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billions
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dollars
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of dollars
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.
Overall
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, petroleum
products
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 were the most exported item in both years.
In contrast
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, textiles were the least exported in 2015,
while
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 both agricultural
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 and textiles recorded the lowest export values in 2016. In 2015, petroleum
products
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 were valued at approximately 60
billion
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dollars
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, followed by a slight increase to just above 60 in 2016. Engineered goods ranked second in both years, standing at just below 60 in 2015 and rising to just over 60 in 2016. Meanwhile, exports of gems and jewellery experienced a slight decline, dropping from just above 40 in 2015 to exactly 40 in 2016. Agricultural
products
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 remained relatively stable, starting at 30
billion
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dollars
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 in 2015 and increasing slightly to just over 30 in 2016.
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, textiles had the lowest export value in 2015, at around 28
billion
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dollars
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, but saw a noticeable rise to slightly above 30
billion
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 in 2016.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 4 times.
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