The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bars illustrate the destinations of
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and PhD degree
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from the United Kingdom after they graduate in 2008. The data does not include
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information regarding the
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who did full-time
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Overall
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, the
further
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study option had been chosen the most,
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voluntary
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was not quite popular amongst
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both
level
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levels
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of
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.
In contrast
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, unemployment had been moderately allocated.  In the first decade of
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century, 29,665 graduate
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chose to continue their education. They comprised the majority of the people who completed their studies.
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, working
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was another
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alternative
for 17,735
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, who constituted the second largest group. The difference between these two sets was notable.
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, the trend of choosing follow-up
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and part-time
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within the group of postgraduate scholars was not so distinct.
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2,725 of them decided to enhance their academic skills, 2,535 landed in
professional
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realm. 
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,
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voluntary
work
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had been desired the least. Merely 3,500 and 345 graduates and postgraduates respectively did.

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