You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were extremely disssatisfied with the experience. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:  Explain the reason for the celebration  Give details of your visit to the restaurant  Say what you would like the restaurant to do

Dear Sir I am writing

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letter to let you know I'm dissatisfied with a recent visit to your

restaurant

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. I came with my friends to celebrate my birthday because I like the food and

ambiance

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of your

restaurant

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. I would like to tell you that

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book

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booked

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Sunday at 7:30 pm, but it didn't meet my expectations. I

Came

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at 7:25 PM,

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and the

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restaurant

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was busy. I went to the host area, and there was a big lineup in front of me. So it took me 10

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to

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to the

hostress

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hostess

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. I told her that

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already

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a reservation, but she said the seat was already given to someone else because we

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5

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late. I told the lady

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was in a queue

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last

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the last

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10

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,

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and

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she said

we

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to wait now. I was very upset because

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spoiled my whole mood. And

afterwards

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she made us wait like for 40

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.

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, when we seated and ordered food it took 1 hour to get food on our table. The experience was really horrible and

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will never come again to your

restaurant

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. I request that you should train your staff more professionally and expand your seating area. I don't want

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someone else should experience the same which

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did. Yours Faithfully, Manpreet Kaur