The charts below show the percentage of water used for different puposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different puposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the percentage of water used for different puposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
the ration of water consumed for various
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reasons
reassons
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reasons
in six
reigons
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regions
around the globe as we can see Europe stands at the top in terms of industrial use
while
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the other
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central Asia was the
least
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but
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the
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Agricultural usage it was the highest ratio out of them all and
lastly
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for interior consuming Souh
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America
had the biggest percentage out of them all but on the other side both of central
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and
south east
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asia
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were the smallest

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • percentage
  • water usage
  • regions
  • North America
  • Europe
  • Africa
  • Asia
  • Oceania
  • South America
  • agriculture
  • industrial usage
  • domestic use
  • significant differences
  • contributor
  • proportion
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