The pie chart shows the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart shows the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the proportions of five sources of
energy
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production
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France in two years, 1995 and 2005.
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, it can be seen clearly that gas and coal accounted for more than half of the total
energy
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production in the country in both years, consumption of petrol decreased in 2005, and the use
nuclear
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power and other sources
were
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minimal. In detail, the
energy
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produced by coal comprised
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29.80% in 1995 with only a slight increase
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about 1% to 30.93% in 2005.
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, the amount of
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generated by gas rose
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by approximately 1% from 29.63% in the first year to 30.31% by the final year. The second largest kind of
energy
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source is petroleum, with its contribution over a quarter in 1995.
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, in 2005,
energy
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produced from
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source was just under a fifth. The use
nuclear
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power accounted for only 6.40% in 1995 with a significant increase to 10.10% in 2005. Only 4.90% of
energy
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was produced from other sources in the first year, but
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number climbed to 9.10% in 2005.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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