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The table below shows the number of students living in the UK gaining English language teacher training qualifications in 2007/8 and 2008/9, and the proportion of male qualifiers.

The table below shows the number of students living in the UK gaining English language teacher training qualifications in 2007/8 and 2008/9, and the proportion of male qualifiers.
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 of students living in the UK
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gaining
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getting
 English language teacher training certifications in 2007/8 and 2008/9 and the proportion of male qualifiers
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, it can be seen that the TEFL of
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 the Cambridge UCLES CELTA & OTHER DEGREES of
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 in female experienced a decreased trend In detail, the Cambridge UCLES CELTA & OTHER DEGREES of
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 were 1295 in 2008/9 and 966 in 2007/8 respectively in TEFL went up through the period, reaching 6870 by the end
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 the period In the meantime. the female
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 to 18446 in 2008/9. and were 18460 . it accounted
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gradual increase to more than 18460 and continued with a gradual rise to-18446 in 2008/9 Moving on percentages. in early 2007 and 2008. the male
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 it was almost the highest one.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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