You and some friends ate meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter • Give details of your visit to the restaurant • Explain the reason for the celebration • Say what was good about the food and the service

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
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letter to express my gratitude for the unparalleled service you provided during our visit to your restaurant
last
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weekend.
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I have read quite satisfactory feedback about your place, our experience was beyond the scope of expectation. In the wake of searching, I decided to celebrate our occasion at your establishment by relying on numerous reviews. I,
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, had some hesitations
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you could manage
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large number of guests or not. Eventually, after observing the welcoming atmosphere of the restaurant I
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decided to book the VIP room prior to the event. On the promised day, the reception contacted me to ensure whether the celebration was on schedule or not and recommended some stunning table designs. The appointment was about 6 o’clock which half an hour takes for our guests to arrive. To tell you the truth, the reason
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our meeting was quite special as I wished to propose
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partner in a stunning location. Undoubtedly, events like these
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strict coordination to achieve the desired result which your place is fully qualified for
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to the elegant atmosphere, the cuisines were exquisite not only in taste but
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in appearance. The dishes and beverages were designed attentively and
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unique taste of them
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the vast palate of people which everyone
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again.
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, the admirable
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of the staff and the
professionallyorganized
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tables exceeded the expectation. I feel it is entirely rational
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homage to the coworkers of
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the way for an unforgettable memory for us. I greatly appreciate
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your elegant service and food. Yours sincerely, Selin Berkay

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coherence and cohesion
Make the introduction clearer and more direct about your visit.
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You could use simpler sentences to express your ideas more clearly.
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Add a closing line that summarizes your appreciation and invites a response.
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The letter has a clear purpose and is well-structured with paragraphs.
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You expressed your feelings about the food and service beautifully.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • outstanding
  • exquisite
  • impeccable
  • flawless
  • attentive
  • accommodating
  • courteous
  • prompt
  • delicious
  • mouthwatering
  • satisfying
  • memorable
  • thank
  • impressed
  • appreciate
  • grateful
  • recommend
  • celebration
  • occasional
  • special
  • occasion
  • stellar
  • exceptional
  • commend
  • commendable
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