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The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
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 graph depicts four countries exporting to Australia. It is clear from the graph that Japan, the US, China, and India in 1990 started from completely different levels, except for two countries. Not only that, but
at the end
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, 2 countries are close to each other, and the other lines are not.
According to
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 what is shown, Japan's exports in 1990 were above 25% and slipped back by
five
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 per
cent
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 in the next
five
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years
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.
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, from 1995 to 2005, there was a gradual dip to about 19 per
cent
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.
Furthermore
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, after 2005, the
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 completely slid. Yet, after 2010, it remained steady at almost 17 per
cent
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However
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, India and China's exports started at under 5% but reached
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 per
cent
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 after ten
years
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. India's
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 during 12
years
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 had a moderate rise, just under 10% plus hit
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 again in 2012. Meanwhile, China's
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 after 2000 till 2010 had a rapid increase to almost 27 per
cent
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also
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 reached 30% in the next two
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.
To sum up
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, we could say that the United States' exports were nearly 13% and hit nine per
cent
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 in
five
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years
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 and increased to the same number in 2000. In 2010, almost touched 5% but gradually upward almost 7%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words line, five, cent, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Percentage
  • Exports
  • Trend analysis
  • Upward/downward trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Comparison
  • Peak performance
  • Decline
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Inferred
  • Global events
  • Economic context
  • Reflect
  • Influence
  • Patterns
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