A company offers a temporary job with no salary, but it helps you to gain some work experience. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, -introduce your previous work experience -tell the manager which department you want to work -describe what expectation you have from the job

Dear Sir, I am writing a letter to you because I am reading a newspaper and saw information that your company is looking for a new waiter , but there is no salary. I would like
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job because I can meet a lot of people and I can talk
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with them. I have experience in a Vietnamese restaurant for six months
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I can speak English with customers. I hope you see the letter and give me an opportunity. I hope you will rely soon for me
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Thank you very much. Best regast, Tuan Tai

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Make sure to clearly introduce yourself at the beginning of the letter.
coherence and cohesion
Try to organize your ideas into separate paragraphs, each focusing on a single topic.
coherence and cohesion
Use a more formal closing, like 'Sincerely' instead of 'Best regast'.
task achievement
You mentioned your previous work experience, which is good.
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You expressed your enthusiasm for the job, which is positive.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • job
  • experience
  • manager
  • company
  • department
  • work
  • skills
  • learn
  • opportunity
  • expectation
  • temporary
  • background
  • interest
  • networking
  • industry
  • understand
  • specific
  • relevant
  • achieve
  • gain
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