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Export Earnings (2015–2016) The chart shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Task: Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Instructions: Write a report of at least 150 words describing the chart and table. You sh

Export Earnings (2015–2016) The chart shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Task: Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Instructions: Write a report of at least 150 words describing the chart and table. You sh
The provided bar chart indicates
country’s
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the country’s
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 export
revenue
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 in
multi-group
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multi-groups
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 between 2015 and 2016,
while
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 the other table presents the portion of alteration in every
classes
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class
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 in the same period of time. Generally, Petroleum product was the highest exported gross among the other 5 sectors,
meanwhile
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meanwhile,
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 fabric and engineered items have
higher
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a higher
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comparing
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compared
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 to fossil products.
Petrol
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The petrol
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 industry remained the biggest income
from
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source from
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 2015 to 2016, accounting for approximately 60
billion
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dollars
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 in 2015, and the portion increased to nearly 62
billion
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dollars
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 (3%
increasement
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increase
). Not as high as the energy industry, engineered items
also
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the
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have the
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 second highest money intake,
this
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 category has
the
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a
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 higher rise rather than petrol (about 8.5%),
while
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 precious stone and accessory declined moderately (a little over 5%). Crop goods remain unchanged for that time period,
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with the
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the
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an
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 alteration
nearly
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of nearly
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 1%.
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,
fabric
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the fabric
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 industry
was
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had
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 the lowest
revenue
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between
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among
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 all
of
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apply
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the
variabel
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variables
 in 2015, approximately a third
billion
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dollars
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revenue
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in revenue
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 compared to energy, but its
revenue
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 rose significantly
reaching
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, reaching
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 just beyond 30
billion
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dollars
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 (rise for 15.24% in a year). Crop and fabric have nearly
same
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the same
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 value
in
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at
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 the end of 2016.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words revenue, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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