The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The six pie charts break down the percentages of three different uses of
water
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(domestic, agricultural, industrial) in six regions.
Overall
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, a large proportion of the
water
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used in South
America
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, Southeast
Asia
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, Central
Asia
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, and Africa is for agricultural purposes. In comparison, in North
America
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and
Europe
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,
water
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is mostly used for Industrial functions. It is noticeable that Central
Asia
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, Africa, South
Asia
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, and South
America
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rely on agriculture, with 88%, 84%, 81% and 71%, respectively.
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, 39% of the
water
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is used for agriculture in North
America
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, slightly higher than the
Europe
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at 32%. Domestic use takes up a relatively small percentage in South
America
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,
Europe
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, and North
America
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, with 19%, 15% and 13%, respectively. A negligible amount of
water
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is used for domestic purposes in Africa (9%), Central
Asia
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(7%), and Southeast
Asia
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(7%). North
America
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ranks first in terms of industrial use (48%), followed by
Europe
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with 53%, which is 5 times more than that of South
America
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.

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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america, asia, europe with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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