people argue that employers should give more attenton to the workers clothes instead they should focus on the job quality. to what extented you agree or disagree? give reasons and examples

Some say that managers should focus on the way employees

are wearing

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dress

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at work,

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others would argue that there are more important concerns like the quality of their work.

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that

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dressing appropriately is a major concern, the

workers

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' performance should be the area of focus. On the one hand, following

appropriate

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the appropriate

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dress code reflects the

company

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professionalety

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professionalism

in their

job

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. If people start wearing casual in the office, that would reflect a negative image, and others would think that they aren't serious about their

job

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,

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, that would damage their reputation and reduce the number of their clients,

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, ZARA

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reported that after the strict regulations they forced on the dress code in 2015 people considered them more respectful and their profits rate increased nearly 23.5% comapred to the

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decade.

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, the

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quality wouldn't be affected by what the employee is wearing.

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, the most important factor in every

company

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that would develop it's profits is the

job

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quality, employer should shed some light on the way their

workers

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are performing and encourage them to produce more, special

workers

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which were producing more comparing to their co-

workers

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should be given credits and other privileges, so the other

workers

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would be motivated and achieve more,

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,after Apple

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had decided to give a bonus to their creative employees, thier

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performance increased up to 45% compared to their performance

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year. In conclusion, wearing

respectfully

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respect

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in the work environment reflects a good image on the

company

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's efficiency,but that wouldn't outweigh how much the

workers

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' productivity is crucial.