The bar chart illustrates the age of people pensioned from
Correct pronoun usage
their job
job
in 7 different countries in 2004 and 2008.
Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
Overall
, Linking Words
while
the number of lifetime Linking Words
in
pensioners Change preposition
apply
entity
in countriesCheck wording
apply
,
Punctuation problem
apply
such
as Denmark, France, Germany, Linking Words
Netherlands
, Sweden and the UK were slightly increased during these years,in Italy Correct article usage
the Netherlands
Linking Words
this
trend Punctuation problem
, this
unchanged
.
In Verb problem
remained unchanged
Denmark
it was at 62 in 2004, after it grew slowly to 62,5. Add a comma
Denmark,
This
figure was just under Linking Words
the
59 in France Correct article usage
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and
it increased to 59. It changed gradually in Germany from 61 to 62. Punctuation problem
, and
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However
in Italy Punctuation problem
However,
during
4 Punctuation problem
, during
years
it stayed stable at 60.
In Punctuation problem
years,
Correct article usage
the Netherlands
Netherlands
it was at 62,8 and it experienced a slight increase to 63 in 2008. Add a comma
Netherlands,
This
mode in Sweden experienced a slow climb from 63 to 63,5 in 2004 and 2008. In the Linking Words
UK
it had a Punctuation problem
UK,
little
change from 62,5 to 63 Correct word choice
slight
between
4 years.Change preposition
over