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The line graph illustrates the percentage of household waste recycled in the UK, France, and Germany between 2005 and 2015.

The line graph illustrates the percentage of household waste recycled in the UK, France, and Germany between 2005 and 2015.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of household waste recycled in the
UK
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, France, and
Germany
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 between 2005 and 2015.
Overall
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, recycling rates in both
Germany
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 and the
UK
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 increased steadily over the period,
while
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 France’s rate declined before recovering slightly. The
UK
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 recorded the highest rate by 2015, and France the lowest. In 2005,
Germany
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 stood at 20%, compared with just over 35% in the
UK
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. Over the next four years,
Germany
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’s figure rose to about 30%,
while
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 the
UK
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’s increased to 40%. From 2009 onwards, the
UK
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 experienced substantial growth, reaching around 60% in 2015, and
Germany
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also
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 climbed steadily, ending at just above 50%.
By contrast
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, France began the period at 50%, the highest among the three.
However
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, it declined steadily to about 30% in 2013.
After
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this
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 fall, the figure rebounded to 40% by 2015, which was the lowest rate among the countries at that time.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, germany with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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