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structure
Add a full intro that states the task and your view clearly. Then write 2-3 strong ideas with clear links.
cohesion
Use clear linking words to show how ideas connect. Each paragraph should have one main idea.
development
Explain each idea with one simple example or detail. Do not rely on vague statements.
grammar
Check spelling and grammar. Basic errors can slow the reader and make your point weak.
task
Finish with a short conclusion that restates your view.
task response
The writer takes a clear stance against the idea
coherence
There is use of contrast with 'However' to oppose the view
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported.After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
I hope this letter finds you well. I am Sara, one of the members of voluntary work in the east of the city. I am writing this letter to inform you unfortunately, I am not able to continue my co-operation due to one vital problem.
It is appropriate and inappropriate at the same moment. I partially agree with this statement. the Internet provides both advantages and disadvantages to a user. The following reasons and examples will be discussed below.
The rate of purchasing books and newspapers is expected to decline in the coming years due to the easy availability of digital content. I completely agree with this statement for two main reasons: cost-effectiveness and accessibility of resources, which I will explain in the following paragraphs with appropriate explanations and relevant examples.
It is common knowledge that students are becoming increasingly reliant on technology. While this trend offers benefits, it also brings significant problems. This essay will discuss the main issues associated with excessive reliance on computers and propose possible solutions.
The 21st century is full of opportunity and freedom. Nowadays, people would rather work individually than work for a company; since the pay is much higher. In this essay, I will address the problem and find its disadvantages accordingly.