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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should Export Earnings (2015 -2016)

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should Export Earnings (2015 -2016)
The bar chart provides data regarding the revenue received from the various categories of exported
goods
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 in a certain country from 2015 to 2016 (the unit of measurement is in billions
dollars
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of dollars
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),
while
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 the table gives information about the percentage change in these categories.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the most significant income the country received from petroleum and engineering
goods
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 and the earnings increased in most of the categories by the end of the period. It is
also
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 evident that the exports of textiles
undervent
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underwent
 the most significant changes. Focusing first on the export earnings, in the initial year, the country’s income from petroleum and engineering products was approximately 60 and 57, respectively,
whereas
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 by 2016, it reached nearly the same sum, roughly 62. Regarding agricultural
goods
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, its figure was just over 30 throughout the period. Turning to the percentage change in value, the most significant increase of 15.24% was seen in textiles, which was almost twice as much as the proportion of
ingeneering
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engineering
goods
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. Notably, gems and jewellery
was
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were
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 the only category
,
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apply
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which
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where
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 income fell, by 5.18%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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