The pie chart below shows the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.

The pie chart below shows the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart below shows the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.
The pie charts depict various sources of
energy
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that
was
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were
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produced in France in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
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, it can be seen that France relied heavily on Coal and Gas in both years.
While
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Petro usage had reduced, nuclear
energy
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production increased in 2005. In 1995, coal and gas
amounted
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accounted
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for over half of the
energy
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sources at 29.80% and 29.63%, respectively. Petro was used third-most at 29.27%.
Conversely
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, only 6.40%
energy
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production was attributed to Nuclear sources.
Remaining
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The remaining
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4.90% was made through others. In 2005, contributions of coal and gas remained relatively unchanged at 30.93% and 30.31%, respectively. Petro's share declined by one-third
at
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19.55%.
In contrast
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, Nuclear's part almost doubled at 10.10%. 9.10% of
energy
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was made through other means, which is more than double in
comparsion
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comparison
with 1995.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy
  • share
  • part
  • type
  • year
  • increase
  • decrease
  • rise
  • fall
  • grow
  • drop
  • up
  • down
  • more
  • less
  • than
  • compared with
  • in contrast
  • whereas
  • overall
  • generally
  • largest
  • smallest
  • big
  • small
  • percent
  • in year 1
  • in year 2
  • unchanged
  • stable
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