The pie chart below shows the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.

The pie charts depict various sources of

energy

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that

was

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were

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produced in France in 1995 and 2005.

Overall

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, it can be seen that France relied heavily on Coal and Gas in both years.

While

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apply

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Petro usage had reduced, nuclear

energy

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production increased in 2005. In 1995, coal and gas

amounted

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accounted

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for over half of the

energy

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sources at 29.80% and 29.63%, respectively. Petro was used third-most at 29.27%.

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, only 6.40%

energy

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production was attributed to Nuclear sources.

Remaining

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The remaining

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4.90% was made through others. In 2005, contributions of coal and gas remained relatively unchanged at 30.93% and 30.31%, respectively. Petro's share declined by one-third

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19.55%.

In contrast

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, Nuclear's part almost doubled at 10.10%. 9.10% of

energy

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was made through other means, which is more than double in

comparsion

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comparison

with 1995.

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Sep 3, 2025

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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131 words

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The pie chart below shows the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achive anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this messages?

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Many goods including what we use on a daily basis produced by other countries need to be transported from a long distance. To what extent Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Several individuals believe that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?