Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: •Give details of the food and services you ordered •Describe the problems that occurred •Explain what you want the restaurant to do

Dear Mr. Zee from S restaurant. I'm writing

this

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letter to express how disappointed

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felt with my favourite bar First of all, my friends came from

italy

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Italy

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last

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Sunday, and

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told them that

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want to take them to a famous

italian

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Italian

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cuisine

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restaurant

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in my country.

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booked a table for five people two months ago.

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Tuesday

evening

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evening,

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we went to the diner, the first impression was that the place was full and the music was very loud. We ordered one pizza, one lasagna, two fries, and one pasta. The order takes more than 35 minutes. When we received the food, the bread of the pizza was so dry

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that it

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was hard to eat.

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, the pasta was very salty, and the fries were cold.

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but not least, the service was bad. I suggest you train your staff to improve the restaurant's standard. All respect, Maryam

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Sep 7, 2025

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structure

Try to keep one idea in each paragraph. Use short sentences and clear links.

language

Check spelling and capital letters: I, Italy, Tuesday, and other proper names.

content

End with a clear request, like a refund or apology, and a polite closing.

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The letter lists what was ordered.

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It states the problems clearly.

intent

It asks for change in the staff.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

150 words

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Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: •Give details of the food and services you ordered •Describe the problems that occurred •Explain what you want the restaurant to do

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

students should pay the full cost for their own study because a university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think the government should spend more money on public services rather than waste money on arts (i.e. music and painting). To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people think that hard work and determination bring success. Others think other factors such as money and good appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In developing countries, rural children have less access to education.some people say that this problem is solved bquestoiy providing teachers and schools. Other think that computer and internet should be provided. Discuss both views and give your opinion.