The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs
illustrates
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illustrate
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New
Zealand
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's import
speding
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spending
from Australia and
Japan
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throughout a decade starting from 1904.
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,we can see that the revenue
Austalia
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Australia
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generated had increased by the end of the
decade
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decade,
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while
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on the other hand
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Japan
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saw a
deacrease
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decrease
.Throughout
this
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time
period
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Newzealand
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New Zealand
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had favoured buying goods from Australia
than
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rather than
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Japan
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. At the
satart
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start
of the
period
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period,
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Austrilia
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Australia
used to generate
qorund
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around
4000
million
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by exporting to New
Zealand
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.Between 1994 to
1996
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1996,
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Australia had seen a modest rise in returns by trading with New
Zealand
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.
However
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following
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, following
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this
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, New
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zealand's
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Zealand's
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spening
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spending
had plummeted till 1999
reaching
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, reaching
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an
all time
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all-time
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low of 3000
million
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.In spite of
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this
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this,
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there was a quick rebound
spending
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, spending
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shot up, despite some fluctuations between 2000 and 2004
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,
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expenditures increased
peaking
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, peaking
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at 8000
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million
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million,
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an
all time
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all-time
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high for New
Zealand
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.
Japan
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at the start generated 3000
million
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,
however
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;
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,
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in the next 3 years would seem to double their profits
reaching
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, reaching
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their highest of around 6150
million
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in 1974.Since
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then
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then,
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Japan
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could not maintain
this
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and saw a fall in
their
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its
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earnings.They had seemed to have
robounded
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rebounded
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, slmost
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slmost
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almost
reaching their original biggest revenue, before plummeting to 2000
million
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at the end
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of the period.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words zealand, japan, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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