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The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019.

The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019.
The bar chart presents the reasons for work from home, and the table shows the number of
hours
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 worked at home per week, broken down by gender, in 2019.
Overall
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, saving money was the most frequently cited motive for both genders. Meanwhile, male workers tended to work from home longer
hours
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 than their female counterparts. Among men, 45% reported saving money as their primary reason, slightly higher than the figure for women at 42%. Productivity was the second most common reason among men at 24%, which was more than double the 11% recorded for women.
By comparison
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, easier childcare was cited by 26% of females, compared with only 4% of males. A vast majority of male employees (81%) worked more than 30
hours
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 per week, followed by 16% who worked between 10 and 30
hours
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. The proportion of male employees
worked
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who worked
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 under 10
hours
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 accounted for just 3%.
In contrast
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, nearly three-quarters of female workers worked fewer than 10
hours
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,
while
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 22% fell into the 10-30 hour range and 6% worked over 30
hours
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 per week.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
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