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The line graphs below show the number of houses built in the UK between 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graphs below show the number of houses built in the UK between 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
figure
Fix the agreement mistake
figures
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 for three different houses built in the UK from 2010 to 2020, including
terrace
Replace the word
terraced
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, detached, semi-detached, and flat.
Overall
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, the number of terraces
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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 the highest from 2010 to 2020. Detached and semi-detached rose slightly but started to decrease in 2014,
while
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 flat showed an upward trend throughout the period.
To begin
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 with, the number of terraces was the most steady among
three
Correct article usage
the three
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 types of houses. Started at nearly
2,500
Punctuation problem
2,500,
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then
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 slowly increased to around 2,800, before dropping to about 2,700 in 2020.
Secondly
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, detached rose from 1,700 and reached 1,900 in 2014. Afterwards, it declined gradually to almost 1,500 in
2018
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2018,
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then
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 remained stable until 2020. A similar pattern can be seen in semi-detached,
whereas
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 it started at approximately 1,800 and ended at 1,000 by the end of the period.
In addition
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, flat was the only material that showed growth compared with the other three types. It experienced a significant increase from around 1,100 to 2,750 in a decade, exceeding the figure for
terrace
Correct article usage
the terrace
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 and
became
Wrong verb form
becoming
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 the highest.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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