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Interviews form the basic selecting criteria for most large companies. However, some people think that the interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays
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Nowadays,
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 many companies use
interviews
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 as the main way to choose new workers. Some people think
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 is not the best method
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 there are better ways to find the right person. I believe
interviews
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 are useful, but they should not be the only way of selecting employees. First of all,
interviews
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 can show some important qualities of a candidate.
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, during an interview, the employer can see how the person speaks, behaves, and answers questions. These are important skills, especially if the job requires communication with clients or teamwork.
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,
interviews
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 give both sides a chance to ask questions and understand each other better.
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,
interviews
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 are not always fair or reliable. Some people may feel nervous and cannot show their real abilities,
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 others may look confident but are not good workers in practice.
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, a person who wants to work in IT may have strong technical skills, but if they are shy in the interview, they might be rejected.
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 shows that
interviews
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 sometimes do not reflect the true potential of a worker. Other methods
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such
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, such
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 as tests, trial days, or group
activities
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activities,
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 can show more clearly who is really suitable.
To conclude
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,
interviews
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 are helpful, but they are not perfect. I think companies should use
interviews
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together with
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 other ways of testing candidates to make the best decision.

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Share your view in a clear how. One idea for a paragraph.
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Add more facts or proof to back up the main points.
coherence
Use more links to join ideas and make the flow smooth.
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The essay shows a clear stance.
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It uses examples to back up points, like IT and nervousness.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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