The charts beloow show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak othe languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts beloow show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak othe languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts beloow show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak othe languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the proportion of
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students
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ability to speak other
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language
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at a university in
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England
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between 2000 and 2010.
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, it is noticeable that the
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proportion
of
spanish
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and
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unknown
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language
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had an increase.
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, the rate of
french
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and
english only
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speakers dropped.
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german
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and
two
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language
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speakers remained the same. The rise of
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and other
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had the same level of rise at only 5%.
On the other hand
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,
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students who are able to speak
french
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and only
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declined, which is 5% for
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and the biggest drop for only
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at 10% down from 2000. Despite the changes of other languages,
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and two other languages remained the same and both at the same level of 10% for a decade.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words language with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • language
  • speak
  • speak another language
  • English
  • share
  • proportion
  • percent
  • rise
  • increase
  • fall
  • decrease
  • change
  • trend
  • overall
  • year
  • 2000
  • 2010
  • most common
  • least common
  • top language
  • variety
  • different
  • compare
  • in contrast
  • as well as
  • in addition
  • more
  • less
  • same
  • data
  • chart
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