The table illustrates data on
average
hours and minutes Correct article usage
the average
spend
by British men and women on various daily activities. The units are measured in hours and minutes per day.
Wrong verb form
spent
Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the table that Linking Words
the
most activity was sleep for both Correct article usage
apply
gender
, and Fix the agreement mistake
genders
females
spent more Use synonyms
time
than males. As Use synonyms
regard
leisure Fix the agreement mistake
regards
time
, Use synonyms
male
spent more Fix the agreement mistake
males
time
than Use synonyms
females
, and Use synonyms
the
watching TV/DVD and Correct article usage
apply
listen
to Wrong verb form
listening
radio
/music were the highest Correct article usage
the radio
of
other activities.
Looking at the details, we can notice that natural needs were sleep, eating and drinking, resting, Change preposition
among
personal
care at 8.04, 1.25,0.43, and 0.40, respectively Correct word choice
and personal
for
males, Punctuation problem
, for
whereas
for Linking Words
females
, they were at 8.18, 1.19, 0.48, and 0.48, respectively.
Looking at Use synonyms
second
category Correct article usage
the second
that
leisure Punctuation problem
, that
time
, it took approximately half of Use synonyms
time
for the first Use synonyms
category
that natural needs Punctuation problem
category,
for
both genders. The first activity was watching TV/DVD and Punctuation problem
, for
listen
to Wrong verb form
listening
radio
/Correct article usage
the radio
music
Punctuation problem
music,
that
took around Correct pronoun usage
which
double
of Rephrase
twice
time
Use synonyms
for
all Change preposition
as
others
leisure Fix the agreement mistake
other
at
2.50 for males and 2.25 for Check wording
activities at
females
.Use synonyms