You recently read in an advert that a local restaurant was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter: explain that you would like to apply for the job give some details of any relevant experience that you have specify the days and times that would suit you.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
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applying
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apply
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a
job
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in your
restaurant
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as it was advertised in the local newspaper. Currently, I am studying the Business Management course
in
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at
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the
St.clair college
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Clair College
, and I
am
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just left with
last
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semester
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left.
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So, as a student, I can do work only for 20 hours
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, and
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that is
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why
i
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I
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need a
part
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part-time
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job
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. The main reason for
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applying for
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this
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job
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as
i
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already have more than 3 years with the Quality
Restaurant
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. In
this
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restaurant
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, I
did
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not only
work
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as a waitress for 3 years, but
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work
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as a main cook inside the kitchen and the kitchen cleaning staff as well.
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to it, I
also
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worked in
the
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a
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restaurant
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named
as
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apply
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punjabi
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Punjabi
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by
nature
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, where
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I
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worked as a helper for
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the cheif
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cheif
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chief
cook. I am available for
this
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job
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on
wednesdays
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and
thursdays
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as a
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, and on the weekend as well for
12 hours
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12-hour
shifts.
In addition
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to it, I have
a
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good customer service skills and proficiency in English, Hindi and French
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. So, I can easily assist
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every type of customer. I will await
for
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your response, and I hope these
experienes
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experiences
and skills match
with
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your needs. Yours faithfully, Harjeet Kaur.

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The letter uses a proper Dear Sir/Madam and a closing with Yours faithfully.
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It shows you have work past in food service.
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You say you can work around your study time.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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