The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The visual data shows the production levels of the most used fuels in the United Kingdom between 1981 and 2000.
Overall
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, the general trend saw an increased reliance on natural gas and petroleum.
Furthermore
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, the decline of coal remained an ongoing movement.
Firstly
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, the production of petroleum remained the highest of all the fuels. Between 1981 and 2000, it experienced fluctuations. It saw a drop after 1996, but after 1991
reaching
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reached
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140
units
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. Natural gas
also
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followed as
;
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apply
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in 1991, it saw a double rise in energy
units
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, from 40 to 100.
Secondly
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, coal had the biggest decline over the years. In 1981, it was at 80 energy
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,
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it fell to 40
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, but it grew back in 1986 to 60 energy
units
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. In conclusion, all of the main fuels used in the United Kingdom were
characterized
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characterised
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by fluctuations
but
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, but
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nonetheless
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, the differences in their production values prevailed throughout the years.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • main kinds of fuel
  • time frame
  • location
  • data
  • trends
  • increase
  • decrease
  • specific data points
  • petroleum
  • nuclear fuel
  • natural gas
  • coal
  • fluctuations
  • correlations
  • patterns
  • analyze
  • summarize
  • provide
  • general summary
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