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Band 5

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for a manager in the local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing describe your suitability for this job Tell them when you are free to attend an interview

Dear Sir, My name is John Smith,
I
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am writing
this
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 letter to apply for a
job
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 in your restaurant. To give you some background, I saw
a
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an
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 advertisement in a BTS newspaper regarding a
job
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 vacancy in your restaurant for the manager's position. I have done postgraduation in hotel management
and
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 currently I am working as a shift manager in a Redberry restaurant. My duties
involve
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apply
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in my current role are handling the staff,
manage
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managing
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 the inventory,
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managing
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 the food
complains
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 and customers. Which has
a
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apply
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similar work as per your
job
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 description
that
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is
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 mentioned in the paper.
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, I am living
in
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nearby , which makes me a more suitable candidate for the
job
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. I would appreciate it if you could consider my application and arrange
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 interview for me. I am available 9:00 am to 11:00 am every
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day.
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Additionally
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,
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I
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 am comfortable with both In-person
as well as
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 Video call interviews. Thank you for the time and consideration. Your sincerly, John Smith.

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grammar
Fix small grammar and spelling. Use 'an' before a vowel sound, 'advertisement' not 'a advertisement'. Use 'My duties include' and 'interview' without extra words. Check 'nearby' and add correct punctuation.
structure
Make three clear parts: 1) who you are and why you write, 2) why you fit, with a short example, 3) when you can come for an interview and how to reach you.
content
Be brief and true. Name the job clearly and add one or two job wins. Do not add extra words. Keep to simple, clear lines.
content
You state your current job and role.
content
You show you have hotel study and know manger work.
tone
You offer both in person and video call for the interview.
The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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