IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 3.5

Write a letter to the library manager. Give your opinion and suggest alternative activities or services during the closure

Dear
admistration
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Administration
, The reason
why
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apply
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I'm writing
to
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is to
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 let you know that
city
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the city
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library
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 is closing for a long time. I understand that
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library
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the library
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 must
renovation
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be renovated
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por
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for
 three
month
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months
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. I'm not so happy
but
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, but
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 it is good that
will
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we will
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 repair
building
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the building
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 and put
nea
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new
I
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. I
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feel myself little bit sad. equipment. That's why I go
to
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there every time. I think maybe you can
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use some
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some
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an
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 outdoor
library
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When
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when
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the
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library
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will be
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is
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 closed.
shoulet
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Shoulet
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 e pot sufficient
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, And
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And
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and
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 I hope you can change some things in
this
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library
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.
Ther
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These
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book
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books
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 are not
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this
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in this
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library
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.
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Therefore
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Therefore,
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 you
wou
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apply
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will
new
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have new
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 historical books for people. buy I would be very happy if you could consider my
requist
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request
. Your faithfully, Xayrullayev
ziyodbek
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Ziyodbek
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content
Add clear facts like when the library is to close and what you would like to see done during closure.
structure
Use one idea in each paragraph. Start with a short hello, then say the issue, then end with a simple request.
language
Fix misspelt words, make names and dates clear, and use simple grammar.
tone
The letter shows a polite closing.
content
The writer asks for other activities for the library.
structure
There is a simple form that can be built on.
Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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