The graph shows the percentage of visiting the cinema once a month or more between 1984 to 2003 (4 age groups) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The image presents the ratio of people who visit the cinema one time a month or more than once for the period 1984 - 2003 for four different age categories.

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, the graph shows clearly a significant increase in three age groups , which are 7-14,15-24 and 25-35.

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, the ratio of visitors aged 35 and above remained constant for several

years

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then

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increased pretty slowly.

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, the percentage of individuals

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ages

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15 to 24

years

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old increased gradually from nearly 15% in 1984 to around 33% in 1992.

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, it experienced a fluctuation over the period 1994-2000. After that, it reached the peak of ~%58 after 2003.

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, the lines in the graph of visitors of both groups, age 7-14 and 25-35 , act

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; they increased moderately over the stated period , reaching 30% after 2003.

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, a few

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after 2000

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, the

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ratio of people under the category 35 and covered reached 10% after remaining under it for around 19

years

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