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Writing Samples
Band 4.5

You have decided to change your profession and want to resign from your current job. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: • Tell him about your decision and its reasons; • Explain what you have learnt from your current job and how you feel about leaving it; • Ask for a letter of reference. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....,

Dear Mrs Harleen, I am writing
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 letter to inform you about my decision to leave
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 as soon as my current employment week ends. The main reason
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 leaving
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 job is
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 have got
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 job in my own
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 of interest.
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 will be a good start in my profession. There is no doubt that
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 have learnt an incredible number of things. I gained a lot of experience and have developed
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interpersonal skills
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 that are going to help me in the future at some point.
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 company will
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 definitely help me to grow more in all the fields. Over the course
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 five years,
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 company has served me like it was my second home. I would really
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appreciate
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 to grow and explore things
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 my own. I would be grateful if you
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 reference letter for my future jobs.
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 you for everything Yours sincerely

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structure
Try one main idea per paragraph. Use a short start, then a new idea in a new paragraph.
grammar
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format
Use a clear opening and close. Put your name after 'Yours sincerely'.
tone
Keep a polite tone and explain the reasons briefly when you leave.
content
The letter asks for a reference.
content
It shows you learned things in the job.
tone
It keeps a respectful tone.
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