The bar chart illustrates the number of
females
and Use synonyms
males
who are working in different sections inside the university in the year 2012.
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Overall
, we can see that the men's percentage was higher than Linking Words
women's
in each faculty except arts and education. Correct article usage
the women's
Also
, Linking Words
it is clear that
both sexes shared the same proportion for medicine. Linking Words
According to
the data given, the women staff who worked in arts had almost 57%, Linking Words
while
the male staff had a Linking Words
percentage
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rate
near
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of
40
%; for business, it is noticeable that the male rate rose to about 63%, Rephrase
about 40
whereas
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the females
females
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female
decreased
to under 40%. Check wording
rate decreased
In contrast
, Linking Words
females
whose field was education increased to about 80%, Use synonyms
while
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males
fell to almost 20%.
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Furthermore
, in engineering, Linking Words
males
had their top point when Use synonyms
females
had their lowest. As for law, Use synonyms
females
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males
had exactly 40% and 60%, respectively; in science, Use synonyms
males
had double the ratio of what Use synonyms
females
had, which was almost 25%.Use synonyms